What Amazon doesn't want you to know.

Gentle alt.startrek.books reader,

First, my apology for cross-posting to this NG. Be assured that this is
a one-off. It will never happen again.

My sole purpose is to draw your attention to what I believe are dubious
practices by Amazon.co.uk. I also believe that at stake here is freedom
of expression.

Amazon have rejected my reader review of a novel by John McGahern. In
the UK and Ireland it was published under the title, "That They May
Face The Rising Sun". In the USA and elsewhere it's entitled simply
"The Lake".

You may have read it. You may even have thoroughly enjoyed it.

That is not the issue. The issue is that Amazon refuse to publish my
review. First, they ignored it. When it failed to appear, they fed me
the excuse of their moderators being too busy to read it. Next they
insisted (three times) that it did not comply with their review
guidelines.

I copied their guidelines to my Amazon correspondent and asked her to
specify the guidelines with which my review did not comply. She replied
that she could not be specific.

When I threatened to expose Amazon on the net, they relented, and said
that my review broke two of their rules. (It did not.) But I amended
it, and you can read it below. You'll see that, although it's critical,
there are other reviews on Amazon.co.uk that are far more critical than
mine.

So what's going on? Have they done a deal with McGahern's publisher? It
would not surprise me; the book trade has became increasingly corrupt.
Why do you think that only a small number of books get reviewed in the
papers — and that they're the same books in each paper? Because they're
the best books at that moment? Think again.

Read the actual READER reviews on Amazon and see how they compare with
the newspaper reviews. You will read lines like: "I bought this book
because I believed all the hype. I was very disappointed."

We are being conned.

Anyhow, I dutifully submitted the amended review, with the assurance
that it would appear within 5 days. It did not.

The astute reader will understand that this could continue ad nauseam,
with Amazon trying to wear me down so much that I would give up and
forget it.

I won't. Free speech and free expression are at issue here. Amazon now
control something like 80% of book sales worldwide. They have killed
the small bookseller. Soon the medium-sized book store will follow, and
Amazon will have a monopoly.

At that point they can do anything they please. Try posting a very
critical book review then!

Sincerely, and my apologies again for the cross-posting!

Margaret Shiels

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[The review Amazon didn't want you to see:]

When MIGHT is right.

In his Second Epistle to the Thessalonians, the apostle Paul wrote of
"those who are being lost, because they didn't receive the love of the
truth, that they might be saved. (2:10)"

What a shame that John McGahern didn't read his Scripture with a little
more diligence; had he done so, he might not have botched the grammar
in the very title of his book, and might instead have called it: "That
They MIGHT Face the Rising Sun". If the poor English had ended there
then all might have been well. As it is, when one gets past the title
page, it's all downhill.

The novel provides clear evidence that, once a writer's book is
denounced by the Catholic Church, all subsequent work will be praised
as literature. We need only think of the frightful Edna O'Brien....

And literature is what this book clearly is not, at least not when it's
read objectively, without the baggage of the encomia that have attached
themselves to McGahern over the years, like limpets on a whale's
buttocks.

It's terrible. I could not get beyond page 36. I tried; I genuinely
did. The lacklustre prose is indistinguishable from that of Alice
Taylor – in fact Taylor's outdoes McGahern's quite often. There is a
myth, no doubt put about by McGahern himself, that he overwrites
excessively, then prunes remorselessly. If that's the case, then the
out-takes of "TTMFTRS" must have been excruciatingly bad.

He has no style, plain and simple – indeed I'd have preferred "plain
and simple" rather than McGahern's weak and often cringe-making
attempts at style. The English language seems foreign to him. It's
English for Beginners, the vocabulary of the semi-educated. And one
would think, to read McGahern, that Peter Mark Roget had never drawn
breath. "Sure why use synonyms," he must reason, "when the one verb can
be made to serve every situation?" Everybody "walks" for example; no
sauntering, hastening, loping, striding or what have you. Clichés
proliferate, and inept ones at that: a bird drops "like a stone" (the
only time I ever saw a bird dropping like a stone was when my husband
let fall a frozen chicken in the supermarket).

All the characters speak with the same, dull, interchangeable voice.
Nor does the dialogue always ring true; at one point, for example, a
country person speaks the line, "None of us believes and we go", a
usage I've never encountered in rural Leitrim.

McGahern cannot write characters that engage me. Because all speak with
the same voice, it was difficult to choose between them, and as a
result, no one character held my attention.

His narrative is even worse than his dialogue: "His eyes glittered on
the pot as he waited, willing them to a boil." Classic Alice Taylor,
that. I flipped through the pages and chose passages at random. There
were no fine words or interesting turns of phrase that merited a
mention. In fact, all I found was mediocre writing, hardly better than
anything a schoolchild could write. And the syntax! Even that infamous
torturer of English syntax Anita Desai could do no worse than: "The
Shah rolled round the lake with the sheepdog in the front seat of the
car every Sunday and stayed until he was given his tea at six."

The dust jacket quotes the Observer; evidently it hailed McGahern as
"Ireland's greatest living novelist". Whoever wrote that should hang
his/her head in shame, and apologize at once to ... well, to everybody
really; such poor writing as this does Ireland no favours.

If I am wrong, and there truly is a great novel lurking between the
covers of this book, then why on earth bury it beneath such dreadful
prose? I honestly tried to allow this novel to grip me, but it failed
dismally. Should I have persevered simply because it was written by
"the finest Irish writer now working in prose"? The hell I should! Two
out of ten, and that's being generous.

Margaret Shiels wrote:

> Gentle alt.startrek.books reader,
>
> First, my apology for cross-posting to this NG. Be assured that this is
> a one-off. It will never happen again.
>
> My sole purpose is to draw your attention to what I believe are dubious
> practices by Amazon.co.uk. I also believe that at stake here is freedom
> of expression.
>
> Amazon have rejected my reader review of a novel by John McGahern. In
> the UK and Ireland it was published under the title, "That They May Face
> The Rising Sun". In the USA and elsewhere it's entitled simply "The Lake".
>
> snip
>
> I won't. Free speech and free expression are at issue here. Amazon now
> control something like 80% of book sales worldwide. They have killed the
> small bookseller. Soon the medium-sized book store will follow, and
> Amazon will have a monopoly.
>
> At that point they can do anything they please. Try posting a very
> critical book review then!
>
>snip

An AP wire story this passed summer quotes "Researcher Greco's best
estimate is that online sales account for 7 percent to 10 percent of
total U.S. book sales annually -- up from virtually nil 10 years ago."

If by "something like 80%" you mean, maybe 10%, ok. They are both
number, I suppose.

You realize that unlike uncensored newsgroups where I've been called a
#$%^ing moron. Or dumb@#$ imbecile, and it's the poster's right to do
so, Amazon is a company, not public property (I know, neither is the
server hosting this group, not the point though).
Amazon can choose what posts to permit. I suggest you go to your local
paper or the new york times, and offer to buy a page, then tell them you
want to publish your thoughts on the page you bought. As long as you
stay away from obscenities, I believe they'll take your money.

Now, to your 'review';

How do you make the connection between "That They May Face The Rising
Sun" and a biblical quote "those who are being lost, because they didn't
receive the love of the truth, that they might be saved"?

You then go on to compare the grammar in both sentences. Well, it's
clear to me that the title of the book is not reference to your quote,
and for the book title, the exchange of 'might' for 'may' would change
the meaning. Both are correct as far as english goes, but the meanings
are different.

The rest of your review is more of a rant than anything that would help
me decide whether I'd buy such a book. You object to every aspect of
this book, and, in the end, I have no idea what it's about.

Another Amazon review begins," this book is a description of ordinary,
Irish rural life, set in the 1980s. There is very little by way of
plot......."

Well, at least that gives me some clue.

Lastly, a bird may very well drop like a stone. I witnessed a pigeon
fly, full speed into a window. What do you it did for an encore? Fell
like a f'ing rock! Really, it did, poor thing.

I am with Amazon, I'm sorry to say. Your review isn't worth the few
nano-pence that the server space would cost them.

Live Long and Prosper
JOE