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Since: Jul 02, 2003 Posts: 1164
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(Msg. 136) Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:16 am
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On Tue, 24 Jun 2008 19:42:28 -1000, "Anne Elizabeth Baldwin"
<anneb @ aloha . net> stomped through my brain with:
>> I think the original indication of Aragorn's age was in the
>> conversation between Strider and the Hobbits in Bree. Again, I'd
>> have to look it up. But since they kind of short-cutted the Bree
>> scenes, I'm not sure where they could have included that.
>
> I think you might be right, and that movie, I can't think of much to pull
>to squeeze it in. But I'd think they could have squeezed into some other
>part of TTT. That wasn't quite a crammed a film as the first one. {Smile}
TTT had it's own challenges. While it was not quite as crammed
with a single narrative line, there was the challenge of
integrating multiple narrative lines into a single over-all film.
We have Frodo and Sam, Merry and Pippin, The Three Hunters/Rohan
all going on at once. There was a lot of switching back and
forth from one point to the other and narrative flow needed to be
maintained as best as possible for the big screen. It's easier
to do these bouncing back and forth in a written novel because
you can seperate things in chapters. Film doesn't work quite as
well.
So, in the film, we have this extended portion where the people
of Rohan are in transit from Edoras to Helm's Deep. These travel
portions are great points for exposition because, "as they
walked, they talked" is kinda a narrative tool even in the
written word. So, we have in the first movie Gandalf's
exposition on fate moved from the table in Bag End to the Journey
in the Dark in Moria. In the second movie, some of the
exposition of who Aragorn is, his relationship to Arwen, and his
decision to actually persue his inheritance of the kingdom is put
into the journeys from one place to another.
Could there have been a better way to present it? Probably. But
we also needed to contrast Eowyn to Arwen. While I understand
the argument that Eowyn was a "princess" and used to court life,
she was also a "shield-maiden"... not your typical "let's sit in
the solar and embroider banners for our men" kinda gal. She
probably spent more time practicing with her sword than with her
needle or ladle.
I'm willing to give Jackson and Co. leeway in bringing such a
complex book as TTT to the screen. That was NOT an easy task,
blending the various threads of the narrative into a single
movie. To keep the film flowing, bowing to the nature of the
medium, certain changes and alterations needed to be made. The
overall perspective and theming of the storyline was well
preserved... not purely preserved which irks the purist Tolkien
fans, but preserved enough that the same story in the books is
presented in the films.
My opinion, obviously... YMMV
Tristaan
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>> Tristaan
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> Anne Elizabeth Baldwin
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(Msg. 137) Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:36 pm
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Tristaan wrote:
> Could there have been a better way to present it? Probably. But
> we also needed to contrast Eowyn to Arwen. While I understand
> the argument that Eowyn was a "princess" and used to court life,
> she was also a "shield-maiden"... not your typical "let's sit in
> the solar and embroider banners for our men" kinda gal. She
> probably spent more time practicing with her sword than with her
> needle or ladle.
I certainly do not disagree with bringing up the subject, nor bringing
up the subject at that point. And of course Jackson also had to be a bit
more explicit with the whole Eowyn-falls-for-Aragorn plotline that was
kind of glossed over by Tolkien until the point that he actually needed it.
The only thing I really object to is that he took what was, in the
context of the story and that particular movie, a poignant moment (Eowyn
opens up her heart to somebody for the first time in a long while, even
if the movie did and could not portray that quite as well as it was
described in the books; especially where Gandalf spells it out to Eomer
at the Houses of Healing), and turns it into poorly done slapstick.
It is just the one part of the story where the script writers really
dropped the ball in my opinion, both in setting the tone of the
narrative and in understanding the emotions of the scene.
The sequence where the people of Rohan flee for Helm's Deep did not need
Gimli first being portrayed as a clueless idiot (regardless if the
actual dialogue is witty), then Eowyn as an equally clueless and
historically inaccurate idiot (did she really not even taste the soup
she was cooking, and was there nobody in the entire camp who was
actually a professional cook (i.e. all the women there ...)) and then
continueing to making Gimli not only an idiot but a moron too (with the
falling off the horse and shouting 'that was deliberate').
A little less slapstick and a little more focus on the fears of the
people and the way that Eowyn shyly opens herself a little to Aragorn
would have made the entire sequence, and the movie, a lot stronger.
> I'm willing to give Jackson and Co. leeway in bringing such a
> complex book as TTT to the screen. That was NOT an easy task,
> blending the various threads of the narrative into a single
> movie. To keep the film flowing, bowing to the nature of the
> medium, certain changes and alterations needed to be made. The
> overall perspective and theming of the storyline was well
> preserved... not purely preserved which irks the purist Tolkien
> fans, but preserved enough that the same story in the books is
> presented in the films.
I agree. It was not the easiest book to turn into a movie, and he did
very well with it. The change to Faramir was startling at first, but
after a little explanation worked rather well in the movie.
The only other tiny little nitpicks I have with it is that apparently
Faramir had access to instant communication, seeing that he could tell
Frodo and Sam about what was going on in Rohan at the same time that it
was actually happening (I am presuming he did not have a time travel
device). And of course, the Ents not only be fairly clueless and
ignorant (about the whole not knowing about Saruman destroying their
forest, and the being tricked by Pippin), but also capable of
teleportation (they arrived seconds after Treebeard called out in anger
at seeing the devastation). Staying a bit closer to the way Tolkien
described it would not have weakened the story and would even have
tightened up the narrative, without having to need to sacrifice a
starring role for the hobbits. If I had been the writer I would have
made the ents agree to come see what was going on with Saruman after
Merry's moving speech at the Entmeet. Then seeing the devastated forest
they could have exploded into anger and action.
Eri
--
Yes - at last - You. I Choose you. Out of all the world,
out of all the seeking, I have found you, young sister of
my heart! You are mine and I am yours - and never again
will there be loneliness ...
Rolan Choosing Talia,
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Since: Apr 18, 2008 Posts: 71
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(Msg. 138) Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:37 pm
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"Tristaan" <tristaanus.TakeThisOut@yahoo.com> wrote in message
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> On Tue, 24 Jun 2008 19:42:28 -1000, "Anne Elizabeth Baldwin"
> <anneb @ aloha . net> stomped through my brain with:
>
>>> I think the original indication of Aragorn's age was in the
>>> conversation between Strider and the Hobbits in Bree. Again, I'd
>>> have to look it up. But since they kind of short-cutted the Bree
>>> scenes, I'm not sure where they could have included that.
>>
>> I think you might be right, and that movie, I can't think of much to
>>pull
>>to squeeze it in. But I'd think they could have squeezed into some other
>>part of TTT. That wasn't quite a crammed a film as the first one. {Smile}
>
> TTT had it's own challenges. While it was not quite as crammed
> with a single narrative line, there was the challenge of
> integrating multiple narrative lines into a single over-all film.
> We have Frodo and Sam, Merry and Pippin, The Three Hunters/Rohan
> all going on at once. There was a lot of switching back and
> forth from one point to the other and narrative flow needed to be
> maintained as best as possible for the big screen. It's easier
> to do these bouncing back and forth in a written novel because
> you can seperate things in chapters. Film doesn't work quite as
> well.
I noticed. Dad was particularly bothered by the way they kept switching
back and forth. He much more confusing than staying with one storyline for a
chapter's worth or two, like the book did. {smile}
> So, in the film, we have this extended portion where the people
> of Rohan are in transit from Edoras to Helm's Deep. These travel
> portions are great points for exposition because, "as they
> walked, they talked" is kinda a narrative tool even in the
> written word. So, we have in the first movie Gandalf's
> exposition on fate moved from the table in Bag End to the Journey
> in the Dark in Moria. In the second movie, some of the
> exposition of who Aragorn is, his relationship to Arwen, and his
> decision to actually persue his inheritance of the kingdom is put
> into the journeys from one place to another.
I guess I can see that. {smile}
> Could there have been a better way to present it? Probably. But
> we also needed to contrast Eowyn to Arwen. While I understand
> the argument that Eowyn was a "princess" and used to court life,
> she was also a "shield-maiden"... not your typical "let's sit in
> the solar and embroider banners for our men" kinda gal. She
> probably spent more time practicing with her sword than with her
> needle or ladle.
I understand. However, surely whoever assigned the chores understood
this, too. You'd think they would have considered this, and given her a task
better suited to her talents. {Amused Smile}
> I'm willing to give Jackson and Co. leeway in bringing such a
> complex book as TTT to the screen. That was NOT an easy task,
> blending the various threads of the narrative into a single
> movie. To keep the film flowing, bowing to the nature of the
> medium, certain changes and alterations needed to be made. The
> overall perspective and theming of the storyline was well
> preserved... not purely preserved which irks the purist Tolkien
> fans, but preserved enough that the same story in the books is
> presented in the films.
I understand. Believe it or not, I don't usually criticize their choices.
There are many things I feel could have done better. However, it's easy to
sit back, watch, and pontificate at leisure about what improvements could be
made. It's not so easy to compose and revise to tight deadlines. I'm not
sure I could have turned out as good a product overall. I hope I wouldn't
make the mistakes that bother me the most, but I suspect I'd make plenty of
other mistakes to compensate. {Lopsided Smile}
> My opinion, obviously... YMMV
Of course; that's what we have here. {SMILE}
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Since: Apr 18, 2008 Posts: 71
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(Msg. 139) Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:52 pm
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"Marian Griffith" <gryphon RemoveThis @iae.nl> wrote in message
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> Tristaan wrote:
>
>> Could there have been a better way to present it? Probably. But
>> we also needed to contrast Eowyn to Arwen. While I understand
>> the argument that Eowyn was a "princess" and used to court life,
>> she was also a "shield-maiden"... not your typical "let's sit in
>> the solar and embroider banners for our men" kinda gal. She
>> probably spent more time practicing with her sword than with her
>> needle or ladle.
>
> I certainly do not disagree with bringing up the subject, nor bringing up
> the subject at that point. And of course Jackson also had to be a bit more
> explicit with the whole Eowyn-falls-for-Aragorn plotline that was kind of
> glossed over by Tolkien until the point that he actually needed it.
> The only thing I really object to is that he took what was, in the context
> of the story and that particular movie, a poignant moment (Eowyn opens up
> her heart to somebody for the first time in a long while, even if the
> movie did and could not portray that quite as well as it was described in
> the books; especially where Gandalf spells it out to Eomer at the Houses
> of Healing), and turns it into poorly done slapstick.
> It is just the one part of the story where the script writers really
> dropped the ball in my opinion, both in setting the tone of the narrative
> and in understanding the emotions of the scene.
> The sequence where the people of Rohan flee for Helm's Deep did not need
> Gimli first being portrayed as a clueless idiot (regardless if the actual
> dialogue is witty), then Eowyn as an equally clueless and historically
> inaccurate idiot (did she really not even taste the soup she was cooking,
> and was there nobody in the entire camp who was actually a professional
> cook (i.e. all the women there ...)) and then continueing to making Gimli
> not only an idiot but a moron too (with the falling off the horse and
> shouting 'that was deliberate').
> A little less slapstick and a little more focus on the fears of the people
> and the way that Eowyn shyly opens herself a little to Aragorn would have
> made the entire sequence, and the movie, a lot stronger.
Often Jackson's humor lacked subtlety and nuance. {small smile}
>> I'm willing to give Jackson and Co. leeway in bringing such a
>> complex book as TTT to the screen. That was NOT an easy task,
>> blending the various threads of the narrative into a single
>> movie. To keep the film flowing, bowing to the nature of the
>> medium, certain changes and alterations needed to be made. The
>> overall perspective and theming of the storyline was well
>> preserved... not purely preserved which irks the purist Tolkien
>> fans, but preserved enough that the same story in the books is
>> presented in the films.
>
> I agree. It was not the easiest book to turn into a movie, and he did very
> well with it. The change to Faramir was startling at first, but after a
> little explanation worked rather well in the movie.
> The only other tiny little nitpicks I have with it is that apparently
> Faramir had access to instant communication, seeing that he could tell
> Frodo and Sam about what was going on in Rohan at the same time that it
> was actually happening (I am presuming he did not have a time travel
> device). And of course, the Ents not only be fairly clueless and ignorant
> (about the whole not knowing about Saruman destroying their forest, and
> the being tricked by Pippin), but also capable of teleportation (they
> arrived seconds after Treebeard called out in anger at seeing the
> devastation). Staying a bit closer to the way Tolkien described it would
> not have weakened the story and would even have tightened up the
> narrative, without having to need to sacrifice a starring role for the
> hobbits.
I know why they did what they did with the Ents. This way did give Pippin
a chance to personally commit to getting involved, and in a way consistent
with his character. I just wish they'd found a way to do that that didn't
show the Ents in such a bad light. {half-smile}
> If I had been the writer I would have made the ents agree to come see what
> was going on with Saruman after Merry's moving speech at the Entmeet. Then
> seeing the devastated forest they could have exploded into anger and
> action.
This doesn't provide Pippin a chance to commit. It's a trade-off here. I
favor your way a little, but at least I understand why they made the choice
they did in this case. {resigned smile}
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(Msg. 140) Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 8:06 pm
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Anne Elizabeth Baldwin wrote:
> I understand. However, surely whoever assigned the chores understood
> this, too. You'd think they would have considered this, and given her a task
> better suited to her talents. {Amused Smile}
Especially if you realise that it almost certainly was -Eowyn's- job to
organise the caravan. Well, together with her uncle's seneschal
probably. Still, she would assign people to do the cooking, tend to the
fires, set up camp, look after the children, check on the supplies,
serve meals to everybody (not just who could get to the cooking fires)
and do all the other things that a large group of people moving around
needs doing. Even if she wanted to cook for Aragorn she would not have
had the time for it.
I mean, you do not expect that the riders would lower themselves (in
their not so humble opinion) to doing 'womanly jobs' do you? Especially
not if there are proper women with the caravan to do the cooking and
cleaning and mending. (well, probably not mending and not much cleaning
Not that I expected, let alone demand, that Peter Jackson had shown all
that, but a little more consideration for the realities of Eowyn's role
in her uncle's court would have been nice. It would have produced less
jarring attempts at humour packed into a too tiny time frame.
Eri
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Yes - at last - You. I Choose you. Out of all the world,
out of all the seeking, I have found you, young sister of
my heart! You are mine and I am yours - and never again
will there be loneliness ...
Rolan Choosing Talia,
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(Msg. 141) Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 8:06 pm
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"Marian Griffith" <gryphon DeleteThis @iae.nl> wrote in message
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> Anne Elizabeth Baldwin wrote:
>
>> I understand. However, surely whoever assigned the chores understood
>> this,
>> too. You'd think they would have considered this, and given her a task
>> better suited to her talents. {Amused Smile}
>
> Especially if you realise that it almost certainly was -Eowyn's- job to
> organise the caravan. Well, together with her uncle's seneschal probably.
The seneschal, certainly. Eowyn... quite possibly, but not necessarily.
I could see that getting left to the fellow who could handle the task best.
Either way, tho, she should be doing something she was better suited to
than cooking. {Smile}
> Still, she would assign people to do the cooking, tend to the fires, set
> up camp, look after the children, check on the supplies, serve meals to
> everybody (not just who could get to the cooking fires) and do all the
> other things that a large group of people moving around needs doing. Even
> if she wanted to cook for Aragorn she would not have had the time for it.
> I mean, you do not expect that the riders would lower themselves (in
> their not so humble opinion) to doing 'womanly jobs' do you?
Not every culture considers cooking a womanly job. In ancient Hawai'i,
cooking was men's work; they barely allow women to do enough to keep from
starving if a man wasn't available.
No, I don't expect that the horselords went that far; it wouldn't fit
the culture they were based on at all. {smile} However, in Eomer's patrol,
the men had to do the cooking, since they didn't have any women with them.
Some of them probably got pretty good at it, too. I wouldn't be surprised
if some of the men would rather eat their own cooking, especially if they
figured they were more used to cooking in a camp setting than most of the
women. {Smile}
I doubt this would improve Eowyn's chances of getting to cook, however.
{Smile}
> Especially not if there are proper women with the caravan to do the
> cooking and cleaning and mending. (well, probably not mending and not
> much cleaning
Probably the only men who did that were as curmudgeonly as some of the
cowboys in the old west, who insisted they wouldn't let a woman cook or
mend for them. They had to do both on the trail, so they'd gotten too good
at both to want anyone else coming in and messing up their system,
thank-you-kindly. {BIG SMILE, REALLY BIG GRIN}
> Not that I expected, let alone demand, that Peter Jackson had shown all
> that, but a little more consideration for the realities of Eowyn's role
> in her uncle's court would have been nice. It would have produced less
> jarring attempts at humour packed into a too tiny time frame.
Yes. Especially since in the book she was left to run the capitol and by
extension the country until the men came home. {Smile}
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