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(Msg. 1) Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:20 pm
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Sorry if this is of little interest to other people, but I was so tickled
I couldn't resist posting. [And it's a bit different from the stuff
that usually gets posted here (Smile]

I've been reading (and enjoying) Anthony Horowitz's "Nightrise". At a
fairly early point in the book, the protagonist (one of twins) has a
'Significant Dream'. Here's an excerpt:

"He glanced round, expecting to see his brother, but instead there was
a man kneeling beside the edge of the sea, holding a large, flat bowl
which he seemed to be filling with water. [....] The man was huge --
and he was completely grey. His face, his hands, his clothes, even
his eyes, were the colour of stone, and if he hadn't been moving, Jamie
would have assumed he was a statue. He was wearing old-fashioned shapeless
trousers tied with a leather belt and an open-necked shirt with rolled-up
sleeves. He also had a hat -- not a cowboy hat but something similar --
and boots that came up to his calves."

Wait a minute...! I know that...! That's...

And of course I was right. The dream is a foreshadowing of dramatic
events toward the end of the book, in the place where that... person... is.
(The 'sea' bit is misdirection...)

It's kind of fun when one has this sort of private recognition of an
author's image. He can't really have expected many people to recognize
it, and if you don't have some familiarity with this part of the world
(specifically Highway 80 in California) it wouldn't mean anything.

If you want to be spoiled, I even once took a picture:

http:jwgibbs.cchem.berkeley.edu/pete/Nightrise.jpg

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(Msg. 2) Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:42 pm
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Pete <neverland.DeleteThis@jwgibbs.cchem.berkeley.edu> wrote:

> Sorry if this is of little interest to other people, but I was so tickled
> I couldn't resist posting. [And it's a bit different from the stuff
> that usually gets posted here (Smile]
>
> I've been reading (and enjoying) Anthony Horowitz's "Nightrise". At a
> fairly early point in the book, the protagonist (one of twins) has a
> 'Significant Dream'. Here's an excerpt:
>
> "He glanced round, expecting to see his brother, but instead there was
> a man kneeling beside the edge of the sea, holding a large, flat bowl
> which he seemed to be filling with water. [....] The man was huge --
> and he was completely grey. His face, his hands, his clothes, even
> his eyes, were the colour of stone, and if he hadn't been moving,
> Jamie would have assumed he was a statue. He was wearing
> old-fashioned shapeless trousers tied with a leather belt and an
> open-necked shirt with rolled-up sleeves. He also had a hat -- not a
> cowboy hat but something similar -- and boots that came up to his
> calves."
>
> Wait a minute...! I know that...! That's...
>
> And of course I was right. The dream is a foreshadowing of dramatic
> events toward the end of the book, in the place where that... person... is.
> (The 'sea' bit is misdirection...)
>
> It's kind of fun when one has this sort of private recognition of an
> author's image. He can't really have expected many people to recognize
> it, and if you don't have some familiarity with this part of the world
> (specifically Highway 80 in California) it wouldn't mean anything.
>
> If you want to be spoiled, I even once took a picture:
>
> http:jwgibbs.cchem.berkeley.edu/pete/Nightrise.jpg
>
> -- Pete --

Hmmm.. thanks for that.

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(Msg. 3) Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:49 am
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On 11 Mar 2008 14:20:09 -0700, neverland.TakeThisOut@jwgibbs.cchem.berkeley.edu (Pete)
wrote:

>If you want to be spoiled, I even once took a picture:

So what is it?


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(Msg. 4) Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:49 am
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Steve Hayes <hayesmstw RemoveThis @hotmail.com> wrote:

> On 11 Mar 2008 14:20:09 -0700, neverland RemoveThis @jwgibbs.cchem.berkeley.edu (Pete)
> wrote:
>
> >If you want to be spoiled, I even once took a picture:
>
> So what is it?

Did you look at the picture? The statue is of a miner panning for gold,
I think it is somewhere up in California gold country. Can't remember
where but pretty sure I've seen it.
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(Msg. 5) Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:00 pm
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I guess one of my original intents was to see if the passage triggered
similar recognition in anyone else, but I suspect the group readership
is too small to make this likely, so -- with some actual spoiler space
below...

In article <1idofml.1m8b7u31qvq6quN%barbarajfn@newsguy.com>,
Barbara Needham <barbarajfn.RemoveThis@newsguy.com> wrote:
>Steve Hayes <hayesmstw.RemoveThis@hotmail.com> wrote:
>
>> On 11 Mar 2008 14:20:09 -0700, neverland.RemoveThis@jwgibbs.cchem.berkeley.edu (Pete)
>> wrote:
>>
>> >If you want to be spoiled, I even once took a picture:
>>
>> So what is it?
>
>Did you look at the picture? The statue is of a miner panning for gold,
>I think it is somewhere up in California gold country. Can't remember
>where but pretty sure I've seen it.

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Yes -- the statue is in Auburn, Calif., right on Highway 80 between
Sacramento and Tahoe. It commemorates an actual person -- Claude Chana.
Apparently he was the one who discovered gold in the area.

Horowitz was obviously very taken with the place as a setting, and
describes the town in some detail. Having stopped off there for a meal
a couple of times on my way to/from Tahoe, I could relate quite well (Smile).


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(Msg. 6) Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 6:22 am
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On Wed, 12 Mar 2008 06:39:00 -0700, barbarajfn RemoveThis @newsguy.com (Barbara Needham)
wrote:

>Steve Hayes <hayesmstw RemoveThis @hotmail.com> wrote:
>
>> On 11 Mar 2008 14:20:09 -0700, neverland RemoveThis @jwgibbs.cchem.berkeley.edu (Pete)
>> wrote:
>>
>> >If you want to be spoiled, I even once took a picture:
>>
>> So what is it?
>
>Did you look at the picture? The statue is of a miner panning for gold,
>I think it is somewhere up in California gold country. Can't remember
>where but pretty sure I've seen it.

The picture was a silhouette. It could have been a statue, or a natural
feature of the landscape that resembled someone bending over wearing a cowboy
hat.


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(Msg. 7) Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 6:22 am
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In article <tsaht3pih1kdeqc4vhbmep22i36fdm99i8.TakeThisOut@4ax.com>,
Steve Hayes <hayesstw.TakeThisOut@yahoo.com> wrote:
>On Wed, 12 Mar 2008 06:39:00 -0700, barbarajfn.TakeThisOut@newsguy.com (Barbara Needham)
>wrote:
>
>>Steve Hayes <hayesmstw.TakeThisOut@hotmail.com> wrote:
>>> So what is it?
>>
>>Did you look at the picture? The statue is of a miner panning for gold,
>>I think it is somewhere up in California gold country. Can't remember
>>where but pretty sure I've seen it.
>
>The picture was a silhouette. It could have been a statue, or a natural
>feature of the landscape that resembled someone bending over wearing a cowboy
>hat.

Ouch... Is your monitor adjusted correctly..? (:-/)
It is definitely *not* a silhouette on my screen -- although it's
deliberately dark (and it was a twilight shot) the details on the statue
should be reasonably clear.

Oh well...
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